[M&S]

I have something for you my band of brothers.

Up untill recently I had been working on a local history based comedy segment which was to run for 30 episodes on a radio station. Alas its gone t*ts up as per usual but i here is the first rough demo version we recorded.

As i attempt to re-sell it, any thoughts/constructive criticism/insults would be greatly appreciated.

http://members.aol.com/stephenm1984/littleplymouth.mp3

[Gaspode_The_Wonder_Dog]

but how did the conditions get worse? i need to know?

I got a bit lost on the first southampton bit is that a local joke for local people?

otherwise very good and the guy sounds a lot like tom baker..

[Quincy]

its ok, but his voice is a bit annoying.

plymouthhh plymouthhh plymouthhh, wolthhhh thhhhrom gladiator

otherwise ok

[M&S]

i did the narration, and crammed a bit to much information into the first demo.

the southampton thing bit is true, but once again the pace of the narrator is far to fast for people to understand.

the voice over guy who did tom baker is brilliant eh.

its ok, but his voice is a bit annoying.

plymouthhh plymouthhh plymouthhh, wolthhhh thhhhrom gladiator

otherwise ok

It is supposed to be a tom baker impression, which includes his trade mark over exageration quincy

[M&S]

Thanks Gaspode and Quincy for your responses, if anyone else has heard the clip i'd appreciate any form of feedback whether you liked it or hated it.

reply.pm.email.cheers.

[Jonny Hoare]

[louis walsh] I liked it. [/louis walsh]